Making Connections

Julie Moore (English)
jmoore@greenriver.edu
Shelley Leavens (Mathmatics)
sleavens@greenriver.edu
Lisa Hoonan-Trujillo (Reading)
ltrujillo@greenriver.edu
Green River Community College

Paragraphs



Purpose: Paragraphs are a miniature form of the larger essay. In other words, everything that needs to happen in a paragraph also needs to happen in an essay. For this reason, we will begin by learning how to structure a paragraph and then we will later connect this to the structure of the essay. In this way, the paragraph will act as a building block for the larger essay.


Assignment:


How your paragraphs will be graded


  1. Topic Sentence: Paragraphs each have an obvious topic sentence that is specific and focuses the paragraph’s topic clearly. All other sentences in the paragraph stick to the topic of the topic sentence. (20 pts)

  2. Organization: Each paragraph is organized in a specific style and sticks to the style it says it will illustrate. The paragraph is cohesive: each sentence in each paragraph connects to the topic sentence. The paragraph’s sentences flow together and connect to one another. (30 pts)

  3. Development/Support: The topic sentences are supported with detailed facts, examples, stories, and/or numerical data (as is appropriate to the structure of the paragraph) that are about the paragraph’s topic. Each paragraph has at least 5-7 sentences. (30 pts)

  4. Editing: The paragraph has been edited for grammar mistakes. It has also been proof read for missing words or unclear meaning. (10 pts)

  5. Writer’s Memo: You will get this assignment near the end of this unit. The Writer’s Memo will be a reflective piece in which you talk about the process you took to write your paragraphs, whether or not this process worked, etc. (10 pts)


First Draft Due (typed): Each paragraph will have a specific due date – see homework calendars for these dates.

Final Draft Due (typed) with Writer’s Memo: Monday, Oct. 22nd


Descriptive Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm questions that you will need to ask in order to find information on your topic. You will then take these questions with you and find the answers to them by researching a bit on campus. Bring the information you gather to class tomorrow. We’ll work on building a paragraph in class.


Topic: The Academic Support Center. This is located in the Holman Library upstairs.




Descriptive Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm questions that you will need to ask in order to find information on your topic. You will then take these questions with you and find the answers to them by researching a bit on campus. Bring the information you gather to class tomorrow. We’ll work on building a paragraph in class.


Topic: The Math Learning Center. This is located in the SMT building on the third floor.





Descriptive Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm questions that you will need to ask in order to find information on your topic. You will then take these questions with you and find the answers to them by researching a bit on campus. Bring the information you gather to class tomorrow. We’ll work on building a paragraph in class.


Topic: The Testing Center. This is located in RLC.





Descriptive Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm questions that you will need to ask in order to find information on your topic. You will then take these questions with you and find the answers to them by researching a bit on campus. Bring the information you gather to class tomorrow. We’ll work on building a paragraph in class.


Topic: The Career Development and Employment Services Center. This is located in the Lindbloom Center.





Descriptive Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm questions that you will need to ask in order to find information on your topic. You will then take these questions with you and find the answers to them by researching a bit on campus. Bring the information you gather to class tomorrow. We’ll work on building a paragraph in class.


Topic: The Counseling Center. This is located in the Lindbloom Center.


Argumentative Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm ideas for arguments you could form about your topic. Since you already researched this topic for your descriptive paragraph, you should have some ideas about possible arguments you could make about this resource. Then work as a group to form a list of things you will need to know in order to make an argument for one of the topics you brainstormed. (Feel free to break down into smaller groups should some in your group want to take different arguments than others. You don’t have to all write on the same argument.) You will then need to find the information you need to write your paragraph, and bring it with you to class tomorrow.


Topic: The Academic Support Center. This is located in the Holman Library upstairs.





Argumentative Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm ideas for arguments you could form about your topic. Since you already researched this topic for your descriptive paragraph, you should have some ideas about possible arguments you could make about this resource. Then work as a group to form a list of things you will need to know in order to make an argument for one of the topics you brainstormed. (Feel free to break down into smaller groups should some in your group want to take different arguments than others. You don’t have to all write on the same argument.) You will then need to find the information you need to write your paragraph, and bring it with you to class tomorrow.


Topic: The Math Learning Center. This is located in the SMT building on the third floor.





Argumentative Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm ideas for arguments you could form about your topic. Since you already researched this topic for your descriptive paragraph, you should have some ideas about possible arguments you could make about this resource. Then work as a group to form a list of things you will need to know in order to make an argument for one of the topics you brainstormed. (Feel free to break down into smaller groups should some in your group want to take different arguments than others. You don’t have to all write on the same argument.) You will then need to find the information you need to write your paragraph, and bring it with you to class tomorrow.


Topic: The Testing Center. This is located in RLC.





Argumentative Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm ideas for arguments you could form about your topic. Since you already researched this topic for your descriptive paragraph, you should have some ideas about possible arguments you could make about this resource. Then work as a group to form a list of things you will need to know in order to make an argument for one of the topics you brainstormed. (Feel free to break down into smaller groups should some in your group want to take different arguments than others. You don’t have to all write on the same argument.) You will then need to find the information you need to write your paragraph, and bring it with you to class tomorrow.


Topic: The Career Development and Employment Services Center. This is located in the Lindbloom Center.





Argumentative Topic


Directions: In your group, brainstorm ideas for arguments you could form about your topic. Since you already researched this topic for your descriptive paragraph, you should have some ideas about possible arguments you could make about this resource. Then work as a group to form a list of things you will need to know in order to make an argument for one of the topics you brainstormed. (Feel free to break down into smaller groups should some in your group want to take different arguments than others. You don’t have to all write on the same argument.) You will then need to find the information you need to write your paragraph, and bring it with you to class tomorrow.


Topic: The Counseling Center. This is located in the Lindbloom Center.


Comparison Contrast Paragraph


Use the comparison contrast grid I passed out and begin to fill it in for your topics. First determine whether you will compare or contrast. Then brainstorm categories that you will need to know about to write a comparison contrast paragraph on your assigned topics.

Follow that by researching on campus to find out the information you will need to know in order to write your paragraph. Bring your grid filled out with information on Monday. We’ll use it to create a comparison contrast paragraph in class.


Topic: Financial Aid and Educational Planning. (Both can be found in the Lindbloom Center.)




Comparison Contrast Paragraph


Use the comparison contrast grid I passed out and begin to fill it in for your topics. First determine whether you will compare or contrast. Then brainstorm categories that you will need to know about to write a comparison contrast paragraph on your assigned topics.

Follow that by researching on campus to find out the information you will need to know in order to write your paragraph. Bring your grid filled out with information on Monday. We’ll use it to create a comparison contrast paragraph in class.


Topic: The Math Learning Center (in SMT) and the Academic Support Center (in Holman Library).





Comparison Contrast Paragraph


Use the comparison contrast grid I passed out and begin to fill it in for your topics. First determine whether you will compare or contrast. Then brainstorm categories that you will need to know about to write a comparison contrast paragraph on your assigned topics.

Follow that by researching on campus to find out the information you will need to know in order to write your paragraph. Bring your grid filled out with information on Monday. We’ll use it to create a comparison contrast paragraph in class.


Topic: The Paper Tree Bookstore (Lindbloom Center) and the Library.








Comparison Contrast Paragraph


Use the comparison contrast grid I passed out and begin to fill it in for your topics. First determine whether you will compare or contrast. Then brainstorm categories that you will need to know about to write a comparison contrast paragraph on your assigned topics.

Follow that by researching on campus to find out the information you will need to know in order to write your paragraph. Bring your grid filled out with information on Monday. We’ll use it to create a comparison contrast paragraph in class.


Topic: Fitness Center (by IVA Building) and the Gator Grill (Lindbloom Center)








Comparison Contrast Paragraph


Use the comparison contrast grid I passed out and begin to fill it in for your topics. First determine whether you will compare or contrast. Then brainstorm categories that you will need to know about to write a comparison contrast paragraph on your assigned topics.

Follow that by researching on campus to find out the information you will need to know in order to write your paragraph. Bring your grid filled out with information on Monday. We’ll use it to create a comparison contrast paragraph in class.


Topic: Choose any two student programs and compare or contrast them. (These include the Community Theater, Student Activities, Multicultural Services, and International Activities.) All of these are located in the Lindbloom Center in one large office.